Thursday 20 August 2015

Angel

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2 comments:

  1. PDS Juniors27 August 2015 at 10:33

    good job Angel but you could have a better voice. from Marlo

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  2. PDS Juniors27 August 2015 at 11:04

    I like the way you put a connective in there but I think you can use a bit more expression. From Isabella

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