Tuesday, 22 September 2015

Michelle's Seagull Shape Poem

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  1. Michelle you have done good work but you could say it a bit faster. David.

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  2. Good job on your poem Michelle but maybe a bit louder.

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  4. Michelle you did a good job and I like the eating sound at the end. Saffron

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