Tuesday 22 September 2015

Isabella's Seagull Shape Poem

5 comments:

  1. I think I should have gone a bit slower and I know it is the CHURCH not the CRUNCH :-) Isabella.

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  2. Isabella, you could pause sometimes so it sounds more interesting. Isidora.

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  3. Isabella, you could use more expression so it sounds more interesting. Michelle.

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  4. Dear Isabella. When you started your seagull poem I think you could use a bit more
    Expression so that everyone could here you. From Caoimhe

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  5. Isabella next time you should read it slower so you don't make any mistakes.Michelle.

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