Tuesday 22 September 2015

Jacob's Seagull Shape Poem

3 comments:

  1. It's good but I should have used more expression. Jacob.

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  2. Good job but I think you have to do it a bit louder, Jordan.

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  3. Dear Jacob. I think you should of read it a bit more slower. From Caoimhe

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