Tuesday 22 September 2015

Jack and Jordan's Seagull Shape poem

6 comments:

  1. Some beautiful reading Jordan. Great helping, Jack. you have done well. Mrs B.

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  2. Good start Jordan and Jack but you need to practise more. Marlo.

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  3. It was good but I think you can read little but quieter.

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  4. It was good but I think you can read little but quieter.

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  5. Good job but it's a bit too loud. Franklin and Chloe.

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  6. Jack and Jordan you could take turns so it sounds a little bit more interesting.Michelle.

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